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somewhere in-between his mismatched socks and your nervous fidgets, you found each other. The way all your words were tinged shy only caused his lips to smile lopsidedly and your heart to speed up. and the heat prancing across your skin was no match for the love in his eyes. as you noticed this, you could practically see his armor and stead appearing.

no one had ever given her reason to believe in fairytales; but he was just beginning to change that.

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he spun you ribbons of poetry which you misplaced as your heart strings that he so elegantly plucked. no amount of darkness could shadow the light flowing through his veins. his voice was the sweetest cotton candy; the softest popcorn.

“listening to you speak is like walking on a tightrope high above a canyon and im holding my breathe and crossing my fingers for if i ever lost the sound of your voice, im sure i would fall fall fall faster and faster. when a word flies from your mouth i see colors that never existed; tastes things i’ve never tasted. a single word from you and i would bend in ways that no contortionist would dream of. you are my sun, my moon, and my oxygen. please don’t leave me, pleasedont leaveme, pleasedonteverleaveme” <sub>
a basophobic is someone that fears falling

im not entirely sure that this is finished. ill most likely come back to it sometime in the future.


for flash fiction month day 16. July 16,2009: [link]

as well as

the 5th prompt for miss-deathwish's 31 prompt challenge: circus

critique encouraged [:
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joufancyhuh Featured By Owner May 25, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You've been featured here: [link] :D
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beneath-the-surface Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
eek!
thanks so much!
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dylanmoore Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
wow well written very emotional and powerful
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:iconbeneath-the-surface:
beneath-the-surface Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
thanks so much
(for the fave as well)
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:icondylanmoore:
dylanmoore Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
hahha anytime ur a great writer
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:iconbeneath-the-surface:
beneath-the-surface Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
gracias, grazie, thank you, danke, merci.

(i only know how to say thank you in 5 differnt languages.)
[:
but that will have to do. haha
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:icondylanmoore:
dylanmoore Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
omg u dont no gibeerish
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:iconbeneath-the-surface:
beneath-the-surface Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
fawoeij;?

is that it?
hahaha
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:icondylanmoore:
dylanmoore Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
ye but the j at the end isnt nessacary
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:iconbeneath-the-surface:
beneath-the-surface Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009
ah ha!
okey doke
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